Welcome back bloggers,
This week I have been learning how to improve my work.
I am proud of this work because I have worked very hard doing math and reading doing lots of stuff.
The part I found challenging was spelling because you have to keep the pencil on the piece of paper until you reach the end of the page.
Blog you later!
Unicorn poem
Unicorn party konga night party time
Nice unicorn’s always are kind which make other unicorn’s happy too just like them
Ice cold winter day party time is awesome
Cold day’s are always fun to play when it’s cold
Orange’s are delicious to unicorn’s because they are orange
Rainbow’s are unicorns most favorite thing of all times
No fun means no parties for any unicorn at all every time
Kia ora Mischa,
ReplyDeleteI absolutely love your poem so thank you for sharing it. You said that you were learning to improve your work but you didn't say what you improved in this. What did you improve in this poem?
I look forward to seeing more of your awesome work.
Mrs Taylor :)
Thank you Miss Taylor,😜
DeleteThanks for what you have said to me.I have worked very hard thinking what to come up with when I was doing it for writing.I was trying to come up with all of it.
From Mischa